How's My Driving?

[codename_fire]

Here for numerous reasons:
#1. I want to improve.
#2. I want to learn.
#3. I want to listen.
#4. I want to be understood.
#5. I want to play her as well as she deserves.
#6. I want to create a enjoyable experience for any potential taggers and old friends.

Anything offered is appreciated, including praise.
For the most part, what I look for in a critique is constructive criticism - this means I want to know what you like, what you're iffy about and possibly how it all can be improved all while trying to cite canon points I may have missed that may, in fact, be a rather large part of portraying her character.


tl;dr
Constructive crits please, thank you.

Comments

[darn-socks.livejournal.com]

It has nothing to do with the fact that she's married, as I play a married character as well and none of my others have even met either of them, much less are interested in romance. It's that so much of the plot leading up to it seemed to be out of sight to me. And the idea of panfandom play isn't to just play with one or two people.

With Treize, from what I remember from my last canon review, they both still very much respected him, so not even mentioning the wedding until right before and then not inviting him? Seems off. And no, before you make the accusation, I'm not Treize-mun. "In game with Treize, however, Zechs has reached out to him before as apart of an invite to said wedding, that the player was not around does not mean that he hasn't tried." <<What invite? Saying 'we're getting married' is not saying 'come to our wedding.' Treize is a noble. Inviting oneself would be a major faux paux.

[codename-fire.livejournal.com]

It was out of sight because it was rushed - and the rushing was intentional. It was an emotional response spurred on by them losing everything. They didn't debate on this, they did just jump into it (characteristic of them still).
And I am perfectly aware of that, neither Z or N have been exclusively tagging just each other.

Respected, perhaps, but Noin also ended up leaving OZ to follow Zechs, and was more than willing to do anything for him over OZ and Treize. They're quite good at being spontaneous.
http://gargleblasted.livejournal.com/1669054.html This thread, as far as I know, was intended to be used to invite Treize to the wedding, but as the player went on hiatus, there was little to be done. Also, I think if you're going to come to me with Zechs' CR with Treize, I would ask you not to. That's rude to the mun and that's rude to me. I would ask that if you're going to critique Zechs-mun, I'd suggest you go to them with your crits about them since it would be Zechs who would talk to Treize about the wedding.

And really, in my opinion, Treize IS a noble, which also means that he could, legitimately, crash whatever the hell he wanted. Nobles are notorious at being able to do this, their position in the aristocracy allows and sometimes even encourages this behavior. Episode 14 gives an example of Noin and Relena doing so as Relena jumps up on stage and interrupts the party to berate everyone in the room.
I've also heard that Treize, when he first posted, has absolutely no problem breaking even into private rooms. This sets a precedence. But if you're going to crit that as well, I'd suggest that you give this information to the Treize-mun, and not to me since I cannot speak for them either.