http://darn_socks.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] darn-socks.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] codename_fire 2011-04-27 07:29 pm (UTC)

It seems like you've extremely rushed Noin and Zechs' relationship and marriage in this game, and it makes it difficult for people to attempt cr with you. Also the fact that you didn't involve other canonmates seems off, especially Treize. From my standpoint, you're playing a group game like it's a one-on-one, and that does not work. This goes for Zechs as well, if you want to share the crit with them.

Using a sock because you've turned off anon.

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